Can someone please help me reword this I tried to put it in my own words so It's not plagiarized but it's not working and I really need this to finish my Holocaust presentation
any help is appreciated, I only have 59 points and I'm sorry but I'm willing to give them all for this thank you!!

Please reword the following below:
July 29 in the year 1921, Hitler had become the leader of the National Socialist German Workers’ Party (Nazi). Under Hitler’s rule, the Nazi Party grew into a mass movement and ruled Germany as a totalitarian state from the year 1933 to the year 1945. Hitler’s early years did not seem to predict his rise as a political leader. During The First World War, Hitler had joined a Bavarian regiment of the German army and was considered to be a brave soldier. Even though Hitlers commanders felt he had the lack of potential and leadership and they never promoted him beyond corporal. Frustrated by Germany’s defeat in the war, in which left the whole nation economically depressed and politically unstable. Hitler joined a fledgling organization that was called “The German Workers’ Party” in the year 1919. Founded that same year by a small group of men including Locksmith Anton Drexler and the journalist Karl Harrer, The party had promoted German pride and Anti-Semitism, Expressed dissatisfaction with the terms of the Treaty of Versailles, the peace settlement that had ended the war and required Germany to make numerous concessions and reparations. Hitler had soon emerged as the party’s most captivating public speaker. Hitler even attracted new members with speeches blaming The Jews and Marxists for Germany’s problems and espousing extreme nationalism. The concept of an Aryan “master race.” On July 29, in the year 1921. Hitler taking the leadership of the organization, which by then had been renamed as “The Nationalist Socialist German Workers’ Party.

Hitler became the head of the National Socialist German Workers' Party on July 29, 1921. (Nazi). The Nazi Party developed into a mass movement under Hitler's rule, and Germany was governed as an authoritarian state from 1933 to 1945. Hitler's early years did not seem to foreshadow his rise to power as a politician. Hitler had enlisted in the German army's Bavarian regiment and was regarded as a courageous soldier. Despite the fact that Hitler's commanders believed he lacked talent and leadership, he was never promoted above the rank of corporal. Frustrated by Germany's defeat in the war, which left the entire country in a state of economic depression and political instability. Hitler became a member of a fledgling group known as "The German Worker's Party" in the year 1919. The party had advocated German pride and anti-Semitism, and was founded the same year by a small group of men including locksmith Anton Drexler and journalist Karl Harrer. Dissatisfied with the terms of the Treaty of Versailles, which ended the war and allowed Germany to make several compromises and reparations. Hitler had quickly established himself as the party's most charismatic public speaker. Through speeches blaming Jews and Marxists for Germany's problems and advocating radical nationalism, Hitler also attracted new supporters. The idea of a "master race" of Aryans. In the year 1921, on July 29th. Hitler assumed command of the movement, which had been called "The Nationalist Socialist German Workers' Party" by that time.

MileenaVelez MileenaVelez · Answer 2 · 2021-04-30T07:16:22+02:00

Replace these sentences with the new ones:
•Hitler’s early years did not seem to predict his rise as a political leader.
•The concept of an Aryan “master race.”
•Hitler taking the leadership of the organization, which by then had been renamed as “The Nationalist Socialist German Workers’ Party.

Improved:
•Hitler's initial years didn't appear to foresee his ascent as a political leader.
•The idea of an Aryan "ace race."
•Hitler taking the authority of the association, which by then had been renamed as "The Nationalist Socialist German Workers' Party.

Everything else is fine and is not plagiarized. Please give BRAINLIEST!! I would appreciate it greatly!