A. Flapping in the wind, the camp flag with the welcome
and the information on it was impossible to read, making it
also impossible for anyone to know where to go. The
disoriented campers stood huddled in a circle, hoping for
some indication of where to take their gear. Moments later
the camp director became aware of their plight. Jumping up
from a desk laden with maps and schedules, he came
quickly to their aid, greeting them, assuring them, and
steering them to their cabins.
B. The flag with the directions on it had gotten loose in the
gusty wind and was flapping everywhere. The campers with
all their gear couldn't figure out where their cabins were and
were walking here and there. The camp director with his
perpetual smile left his office to help the confused campers
and was guiding them to their cabins. The camp with all the
happy campers was now off to a good start and was
promising to be the best ever.
C. Flapping crazily in the gusty wind, the flag welcomed all
to camp. Giving directions to the campers, the flag was
impossible to read. Searching for their cabins, campers
dragged their gear from here to there. Grinning to himself,
the camp director left to help.
D. The flag got loose in the wind and flapped everywhere.
The flag was impossible for the campers to read. The
campers dragged thier gear around trying to find their
cabins. The camp director left to help the campers.
Which passage on the left uses
the best VARIETY of sentence
structure and sentence
length?
A. Passage A
B. Passage B
C. Passage C
D. Passage D